you have story lines that can be explored as it relates to Book 7 (Delphi Exploration) and the Paraxeans and Book 8 (Delphi Colony) and how humanity builds a extra solar colony which could provide a good spinoff direction if a new story line takes up issues that came to light as it concerns colonialism and some of Earth's governments that is brought up in I believe book 11 I think (I don't want to give any spoilers away). I think this was a master stroke for this series and keeps your reading audience in suspense as to your direction. I think your transition from Book 10 (Delphi League) to Book 12 (Delphi Diversion) was a success it give you many options for your story line. although I hope you do not get board and abruptly end the story the same way. I would compare your series with the Honor Harrington Series as far as the way you keep the progression of the storyline flowing easily for your readers. I have one question are you planning to have this series extend out with many books and if you have not decided and are willing to listen to you readers I would like to say I hope you do and I enjoy these adventures. I cant see it happening without elected officials doing what they do best and ruin it all.Įither way I have loved your story and I am wondering when you see your next book coming out I would gladly pre order it on kindle. I am have issues trying to see how mark will be able to switch the Delphinine government to a Democratic one. I cant wait to see where the story goes and how the relationships in your latest book progress. Love your books, I have the kindle and audible versions. I hope this reaches you, as I'd sincerely love to help in any way I'm able. People with an imagination like yours are to be treasured, as I believe you must be by all of your readers. I only wish I had your kind of imagination, but alas, that was not to be. I certainly can't find any criticisms of your imaginative story line(s) or development of your characters. I've noticed that your later novels have fewer of the errors I noticed in the first ones, so I believe you've either learned more about grammar and punctuation or have brought in another person who's good at them. In fact, if you only trust me to re-edit your early books (or even just one as a test), I'd be glad to do that, too. I'm completely retired and have little else to do, so I'd be glad to help with your editing without any charge. I understand why those errors got through, as you've self-published your wonderful books, but think a little extra help may be called for. The errors or typos I've noticed in your books aren't the world's worst, by any means, but can be distracting for anyone who is used to perfectly and professionally edited novels. The Appeal, $1.Bob Blanton-I'm not sure how else to contact you, but would like to offer my help in editing your works, which I absolutely love (13 in the Delphi line, so far)! I have a bachelor's and master's degrees in English, and taught Composition 1 in college for a few semesters, so I've graded/edited plenty of papers besides my own. We Are All Completely Beside Ourselves, $2.99 (I loved this book)įinlay Donovan is Killing It, $2.99 (book 1- soooo much fun)Īlias Emma, $1.99 (this was a staff pick at my local library!)Īll Adults Here, $1.99 (I loved this one) NEW: Retirement Gifts Men Will Love and Use The Best Prime Reading for September (Choose 10 free books from the library) The Power of Habit, $4.99 (this is so insightful- still think about it!)Įleanor Oliphant is Completely Fine, $1.99Ī Dangerous Education, $2.49 Monday Steals This is Your Life, Harriet Chance, $2.99 (I loved this one) The Last Housewife, $1.99 (good and very dark!!) The Best Prime Reading for September (Choose 10 FREE books from the library) NEW: FREE Amazon First Reads Book (Choose 1) New 2023 Fall Reading Guide (37 Books to Check Out Now) NEW Book List: The Best Page Turners About Motherhood New Podcast: The Best Motherhood Lessons from Literary Characters (The Author of The Favor (Adele Griffin is Guest Host) The Best Daily Kindle Book Deals Thursday Steals Check out our free printable reading worksheet, our free summer reading guide, and our free book club. Other fun bookish freebies are available on the site too. Be sure to check their site for quarterly updates. Readers can find additional free books on Stuff Your Kindle Day 2023 hosted by Romance Bookworms. You can read more about how the Kindle First Reads program works here. ![]() NOTE: Make sure to snag your FREE Prime book this month. I try to only share the best Amazon Kindle book offerings for you and your family! Be sure to bookmark this page to check back daily. ![]() This ebook deals page will be updated daily with the best book picks of the day. If you are looking for the best daily Kindle deals, I have you covered.
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